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Haiku, Write, Heart, Bliss by ~SnoringFrog:iconSnoringFrog:



Just a few haikus
They are for your enjoyment
I hope you like them

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I wanted to write
So I began to compose
This was the result

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I tasted a heart
It was sweet and still beating
But now it is not

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Body--still with bliss
There was a hole in his chest
She'd stolen his heart
©2009 ~SnoringFrog
:iconsnoringfrog:

Author's Comments

I wrote these haiku
Now they have been read by you
Thank you for your time

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:iconilluminara:
Hehe, nice. So is this what you do when you get bored?

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"As a nation of free men, we must live through all time or die by suicide." - Abraham Lincoln
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Junior Admin for *TheWritersMeow.
:iconsnoringfrog:
I'm not sure...it never has been before, but it worked now. lol. In the future I might try to actually do some more serious ones (like Bliss) for more of a challenge.

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What's done is done, regrets change nothing.

Absolute Zero -When you want to be cool, this is the spot.

*TheWritersMeow *Apophysis
:iconilluminara:
Sounds fun. Good luck with that.

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"As a nation of free men, we must live through all time or die by suicide." - Abraham Lincoln
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Junior Admin for *TheWritersMeow.
:icondudefrufru:
I read your haiku
They were very interesting
Have a happy day



(I think I did that right)
:iconsnoringfrog:
I think it's 5-7-5, but I don't remember.

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What's done is done, regrets change nothing.

Cobalt Figure 8 - You probably don't want to go there.

*TheWritersMeow =Apophysis
:icondudefrufru:
yeah i figured that out by just counting the syllables in your haiku cuz i had no idea before

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