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Nobody's Here

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"Is--is...someone else here?"
           
                             " . . . No."
100 Theme Challenge 2011 - 72 - Silhouette

52 Week Six Word Story Challenge - Write a dialogue only six word story (between at least two people).

Still tweaking with the exact wording. Initially, this ended with "No" instead of "Nobody".

For the first part, I was trying to get that nervous/scared emotion in it. With the formatting in the reply, I was aiming to make the reply as creepy as possible, did I accomplish both of those?

I wish I could do this one in audio. I can hear the voices myself, and it feels like it'd be so much simpler and more effective to convey the emotions that way. Oh well.
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